PLEASE NOTE: I am not currently accepting new critique clients!

Rhyming Picture Book Critiques


I offer critiques on rhyming picture books only. Critiques consist of the following:

  • A


    of meter, rhyme, imagery, sound, and figurative language

  • S


    and revisions on meter, story, and grammar

  • E


    of opening, plot, character, and other story elements

  • R


    for further development and revision

How to Purchase a Critique

  • Send your critique request to me at
  • Attach your manuscript as a Word document.
  • I will contact you with the projected turnaround time and payment information.
  • Purchase your critique via PayPal (I will provide a payment link).

I currently have a turnaround time of 3-4 weeks. I will let you know immediately if the turnaround will be longer.

Your critique will be completed using Track Changes in MS Word and will be returned to you via email.

I look forward to reading your work!


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