2024 WINNERS - SUMMER CONTEST

LYRICAL LANGUAGE LAB

1ST ANNUAL FREE VERSE POETRY CONTEST *for kidlit

THEME: Summer Snapshot

CONGRATULATIONS 

to our winners and honorable mentions!

 
 

The judges are thrilled to present the poets 

and their poems.

FIRST PLACE

SWIMMIN’ HOLE

Leap

into a cold dark mirror 

rocket up up up

and guzzle air

on your back, lily-pad flat, you float

watch treetops

swish and sway in slow motion

 

Tangle-weeds

tickle your toes

the ghost of a fin

glides by

double-winged dragonflies

mistake your belly

for an island

 

Minutes

melt into minnows

hours unwind

around cloud clocks

when you can’t tell

where your skin ends

and the water begins,

slink onto a boulder

and laze in the sun

island side up

 

© 2024 Sally Stanton

SALLY STANTON

Sally is an artist and writer living in Maine who loves to swim in lakes. As an elementary school librarian, she loved sharing poems and supporting students writing their own poetry and prose. She holds a BFA from Massachusetts College of Art and Design and an MFA in Creative Writing for Young People from the Solstice Program at Lasell University. Her paintings have been exhibited in group and solo shows around New England including the Portland Museum of Art, Waterfall Arts, and the Harlow Center for the Arts. Her middle-grade manuscript earned a full scholarship to the Highlights Foundation week-long writing workshops and her poetry has been published in Cricket Magazine. She is a member of SCBWI.

IG: @sal.stanton

WHAT THE JUDGES SAY:

If ever a poem fit a theme, Sally’s “Swimmin’ Hole” is it. We love this summer snapshot and the sense of solitude and being one with nature that it evokes (“when you can’t tell/where your skin ends/and the water begins”). Sally puts us right there in the cool lake and then dazzles us with imagery like “the ghost of a fin,” “cloud clocks,” and the gorgeous “minutes melt into minnows.” SIGH! We also love the callback to the tummy-island at the end. This is a tight, well-crafted poem.

SECOND PLACE

FREEDOM

Tonight’s the night,

the stay-up night,

the once-a-year, sky’s-clear,

race-you-out-the-door

      night.

 

In the park, everything

     green, 

           brown, 

                 white by day 

is blue in the not-yet, 

not-quite night that, 

      tonight, 

  I am a part of.

 

Bats 

      flap 

          flap 

above the path. Up ahead   

my sister laughs,   

head thrown back,

an attack of 

we-should-be-in-bed

      giggles

as we skip through

the might-need-a-flashlight,

calling-all-fireflies 

      night. 

 

Blue grows darker—

“Quick, let’s get there!” 

      POP!

            POP!

                   BOOM!

Sky lights up,

bright streams down

in the glad-you’re-here,

clap-clap-cheer 

      summer night.

 

 

© 2024 Korena Di Roma Howley

KORENA DI ROMA HOWLEY

Korena is a freelance writer and editor and reports on science news and education for multiple outlets. While at National Geographic, she encountered numerous tales of resilience, innovation, and discovery from explorers and storytellers whose work inspired her as she ventured into the world of children’s literature. Korena’s debut picture book, Sarang Saves the School, with illustrator Joowon Oh, will be released by Candlewick in spring 2025, while her second picture book, A Hanbok for Hana, also with Candlewick and illustrated by Jaime Kim, will be published in 2026. She lives in Williamsburg, Virginia, with her husband and son.

 

Web: korenahowley.com
IG: @KDRHowley
X: @KDRHowley
Bluesky: @korena.bsky.social

photo credit: Autumn Hefner Photography

WHAT THE JUDGES SAY:

We love Korena’s playful language that gives her child narrator a distinct voice, full of anticipation and adventure. Her deft use of compound adjectives (“we-should-be-in-bed giggles”) adds to the narrator’s giddiness and keeps the reader moving along, picking up the pace as we get closer to those fireworks. Sound devices like consonance, assonance, and onomatopoeia make this poem a delight to read out loud. In this summer snapshot, Korena perfectly captures the excitement of a child on their special “stay-up night.” 

THIRD PLACE

BELLY OF THE SUMMER

hallelujah, sun!

 

you have eaten up

leaf and land, sand and snow 

ocean vapor, lava flow

 

now your belly

glows so full and fat

that you have to lie back 

in your blue hammock

 

lie back with your many arms

thrown wide           and just shine

 

 

© 2024 Heidi Mordhorst

HEIDI MORDHORST

After 35 years as a classroom teacher and early-years Language & Literature specialist, Heidi continues to teach poetry reading and writing workshops for all ages from 4 to adult as a Teaching Artist with the Maryland State Arts Council. Heidi’s poetry and other writing  appears in numerous poetry anthologies and journals as well as in her own two collections of poetry for young people: Squeeze: Poems from a Juicy Universe and Pumpkin Butterfly: Poems from the Other Side of Nature, both published by Wordsong/Boyds Mills.

 

Web: whispershoutwritingworkshop.net
Blog: myjuicylittleuniverse.blogspot.com
IG: @heidi_mordhorst_whispershout
FB: @HeidiMordhorst
Bluesky: @HeidiMordhorst.bsky.social

WHAT THE JUDGES SAY:

We say “hallelujah, Heidi!” for this morsel of pure joy. We adore the extended metaphor of the sun as a ravenous creature, eating up the landscape until it “glows so full and fat”–what an image! Heidi’s masterful use of sound devices like occasional rhyme (“leaf and land, sand and snow”), consonance (…lie back/in your blue hammock”), and repetition (“lie back”) adds to the drama and makes us want to throw our arms wide and proclaim this poem from the rooftops. 

HONORABLE MENTION

(alphabetical)

ARCTIC BUMBLEBEE

Sole survivor, 

the little queen sleeps

in an old vole hole, 

her striped fur iced 

by months of night, 

only royal antifreeze

keeping her breathing— 

                 until

 

sun 

 

     tugs buds up, 

            thaws tundra deep

                     to tap her 

            like the gentlest 

     tuning fork—

 

She shivers her wings warm, 

     revs her summer hum 

           above

 

                    where willow nectar waits 

               to feed the tiny eggs 

         within her,

and yellow poppies 

         cup light, 

               singing

                                  come, bask.

 

 

© 2024 Elizabeth Kuelbs

ELIZABETH KUELBS

Elizabeth Kuelbs writes poetry, fiction, and nonfiction for children and adults. She holds an MFA from Vermont College of Fine Arts and you can find her work for young readers in What Is Hope?, Things We Feel, Tyger Tyger Magazine, Spider, Cricket, The Dirigible Balloon, and elsewhere. Elizabeth loves spotting bumblebees on the hiking trails near her Los Angeles home. 

Web: elizabethkuelbs.com
IG: @elizkuelbs
X: @elizabethkuelbs 

FLEEING THE HEAT

On the Julyest of days,

we tug swimsuits over sticky skin.

Add frayed jean shorts,

torn tees,

last year’s sneakers

with creek sand in the toes.

 

Lugging inner tubes—their burning bodies 

sucking in sunshine

whiffing out rubber—

we plod

                  plod

                              plod

down the 54th Street hill.

 

Down to moist, muddy air

where sun-dapples play on pebbled shallows

and rapids sing

Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!

 

Gurgling water seeps through canvas,

tickling our toes.

We steer our tubes toward the middle,

then hop in

and let the cool, swirling current

carry

us

a w   a      y.

 

 

© 2024 Sara Matson

SARA MATSON

Sara has published more than 175 stories, articles, poems, and crafts in children’s magazines. She took Renée’s Lyrical Language Lab course in 2022 and has loved writing poetry ever since. Growing up, she spent many summer afternoons inner tubing down the Minnehaha Creek near her home in Minnesota.  

Web: saramatson.com

summer love

she loved him like she loved summer

 

knowing it wouldn’t last forever

but throwing herself into it 

like taking a running leap

into a still lake in June

 

their love was sweet and messy 

like watermelon juice 

dripping down chins and fingers

the sound of their laughter 

tossed in the crashing waves

 

the touch of his hand 

like sunshine on her shoulders

his eyes bluer than the July sky

smile bright as fireworks on the Fourth

 

his kisses like cravings 

for ice cream cones in August

his coconut scent lingering

 

 

that summer 

he was everything 

 

when autumn arrived

 

she cried.

 

 

© 2024 Sarah Meade

SARAH MEADE

Sarah Meade’s poetry and stories have been published in Hop to It: Poems to Get You Moving (Pomelo, 2020), Babybug, Ladybug, Highlights Hello, High Five, Phoenix English, The Toy, Little Thoughts Press, The Dirigible Balloon, Poetry as Promised, and more. She’s a PAL member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, co-host of #KidLitZombieWeek, Madness! Poetry authlete, Little Free Library steward, Girl Scout leader, mom of two, and constant reader.

Web: sarahmeadewrites.wordpress.com
IG: sarahmeadewrites

SUMMER ARTS & CRAFTS

Inside my cool

               school cafeteria

I weave cotton loops

               of swimming pool blue

and cloud-puff white,

               tigerlily burst, firework red, 

bikeride pink streaked

               with purple popsicle.

 

The metal pegs of a square loom 

               stand patient

for my slow-learning fingers

as I whisper–

               over, under,

              over, under

weaving potholders

for Mom’s winter kitchen

when today is just

                this memory.

 

 

© 2024 Linda Mitchell

LINDA MITCHELL

Linda is a family girl, kitty-cat mama, and middle school librarian. When she isn’t chasing literal and metaphorical cats she enjoys writing before sunrise and dreams of publishing her work in the form of a book someday. She’s really taken to mixed media art with old papers and discarded books, and even though she’s not much into social media these days you can find her work at her Poetry Friday blog and on Instagram. 

Blog: awordedgewiselindamitchell.blogspot.com
IG: @hubeimom

A field full of summer

We run through summer;

lakeside, in parks, along beaches, 

but today we run  

through a field of giants.

Our faces to the lemon sun,

we track it 

across the cotton candy sky.

We flock like the birds 

through the fresh green stems,

swarm like the bees 

to the dinner-plate heads,

curl like fuzzy caterpillars 

in the sleepy summer heat.

We cut down our favorites

with knowing shears,

take vasefuls of yellow

for golden summer homes.

As the sunflowers

wilt, fade, dry…

we dream of 

a field full of summer

for next year,

and a pocketful of snacks

to see us into fall.

 

 

© 2024 Anne Reilly

ANNE REILLY

Anne is from Scotland, now living on the Northern California coast where she loves to whale watch, beachcomb and stargaze. She loves writing quiet, lyrical picture books and poetry, and is about to revise her first YA novel in verse.

Facebook: @AnneReilly
IG: @wurdburd

CENTER FIELD

I’m listenin’.

 

I know my job.

Nothin’s gettin’ by me.

 

In the dugout door,

Coach lazy-leans,

eyes almost closed. 

We’ve got a snooker going

 

when the slugger comes to bat.

 

I’m listenin’.

 

Chatter’s pickin’ up.

Only once I glance her way.

 

Southpaw.

 

So I sashay 

a might 

toward right.

 

I’m listenin’.

 

Think about it, batter.

I’m so little.

Maybe coach played me out of pity. 

 

(Maybe not)

 

Go on, hit it to me.

I’m not lookin’ your way.

I’m just watchin’ these moths meander.

 

CRACK

 

Cheetah legs spring.

Mine!

No! Lost in the lights!

There—

Dive!

 

That’s three.

 

 

© 2024 Janet Robertson

JANET ROBERTSON (aka Kidd Wadsworth)

Kidd Wadsworth creates. When she creates with words, she loves easy-to-understand poetry, dragons, sentient plants, wildly free people, and hope-filled endings. 

Web: kiddwadsworth.com

RASPBERRY STORM

© 2024 Lisa Roullard

LISA ROULLARD

Lisa resides in Salt Lake City, Utah, where she enjoys a view of the Wasatch Mountains on her neighborhood walks. Her poems for children can be found in The Dirigible Balloon, Little Thoughts Press, The Toy, and Parakeet. 

X: @lisaroullard
IG: @lroullard

SHORTLIST

We’re getting closer!

Congratulations to these TOP 10 poems!

LONGLIST

Congratulations, poets! 

The judges chose your poems out of hundreds of entries!

THANK YOU TO ALL WHO PARTICIPATED!